April poetry, day 8

Beach Rituals

At sixteen my son and his two friends
are cresting the first wave of manhood –
their arms and legs extend

from their torsos like freshly molded
coils of clay, and a glaze of down
glistens on their upper lips.

After slapping on a few dabs of sunscreen
they trudge across the sand, in the wake
of three Venus de Milos with dimpled hips.

Laughter trails away with the cries
of gulls and breakers. A breeze carries
the scent of salt, mollusks, and seaweed

to my spot under a lime-green tent,
where I’m sheathed in a long-sleeve blouse,
protected with sunglasses and a hat.

They bare their chests beneath
a sun nailed to the sky, poised to forget
that I’m in the background, waiting.

***

This one was supposed to be about routines, but I veered from the theme a bit. It’s hard to write or even think about routines when I’m at the beach.

From my vantage point on a bench outside the Venice Library there’s a giant palm tree, a live oak with a wide canopy,and a lovely sea breeze calling me back to the waves. I miss you all, but I’ll catch up when I return on Sunday. I have a few poems to write between now and then, since I’m a day behind with napowrimo!

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  1. dale Avatar
    dale

    Ah, you capture it so well. “Poised to forget,” that about sums it up, this age, doesn’t it?

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  2. jo Avatar
    jo

    Really like this, especially the last stanza. You’ve done so well this week……pressure to write obviously agrees with you! Have fun in your tent — I also cover up!

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  3. Deb Avatar
    Deb

    Beautiful scene, poem. I wish I were there. (Similarly clothed!)

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  4. carolee Avatar
    carolee

    as much as i long to be needed by these little boys at my feet a little less, i dread being relegated to the background when they get a little older. this shows that dynamic well.

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  5. Michelle Avatar
    Michelle

    A pervading wistful resignation, C.

    I’m picturing you as the mysterious sunglassed stranger on the beach. (Dip your toes in the water for me …)

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  6. susan Avatar
    susan

    a sun nailed to the sky, poised to forget

    an unforgettable line. Great write, C.

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  7. Collin Kelley Avatar
    Collin Kelley

    Gorgeous poem, Christine.

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