The House of a Thousand Stairs

The House of a Thousand Stairs

Al Capone and his gun moll Myrtle slip
down the Chattahoochee in a canoe,
their faces dappled with moonlight and shadows.
Water runs over rocks, owls call,
breath puffs in humid waves.

They reach a wooden dock camouflaged
behind honeysuckle vines, magnolias,
climb with muffled footfalls the stones leading
to The House of a Thousand Stairs, Caponeโ€™s
hideout when he canโ€™t take Chicagoโ€™s heat.

This is the tale we tell around campfires
at the top of a cliff on the riverโ€™s edge. Passing
a joint, we speak of Caponeโ€™s getaways to a mythic
piedmont, dare each other to descend stairs
cut into granite, count steps leading to dark currents.

But there is no house, only a bare patch of earth,
boulders, scrubby bushes, a remote enclosure
for teenage gatherings on muggy Georgia nights,
unseen by the law. We cartoon caricatures
of ourselves as the keepers of Al Caponeโ€™s

former lair, possess secret knowledge, are privy
to underground rumblings of the past, have truck
with danger, can hold our own in a world of mystery,
as we congregate on the ruins of renegades,
The House of a Thousand Stairs.

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  1. jorc Avatar
    jorc

    This was great!
    jorc

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  2. Julie Avatar
    Julie

    Beautiful, Christine! I love the gothic tone and all those wonderful details.

    But what really rocks is that you have TWO stories going on here! I love that! I can simultaneously see Al Capone and the teenagers around the campfire telling his story. I can see the faces, smell the joint, hear the crickets. Yep…I even hear crickets there. And the crackle of a fire. The parallel between teenage life (hiding from the law) and Capone is brilliant. The fact that they’re on a cliff at a river’s edge is a perfect detail to fit the tone. I’m doing cartwheels over this one.

    We have a spot like this, too:) I love this poem a thousand times!

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  3. ozy Avatar
    ozy

    memories = ghosts, ghosts = memories. its all semantics, eh?

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  4. rob kistner Avatar
    rob kistner

    “they reach a wooden dock camouflaged
    behind honeysuckle vines, magnolias,
    climb with muffled footfalls the stones leading
    to The House of a Thousand Stairs…”

    This stirred my curiosity — I wanted to tread those stones…

    …rob

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  5. Linda Jacobs Avatar
    Linda Jacobs

    oh, this took me back 40 years!

    I love all the details in here!

    Just excellent!

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  6. dale Avatar
    dale

    Nice.

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  7. Michelle Avatar
    Michelle

    The title sends me into gothic paroxyms of rapture, Christine – so does the poem. Beautiful!

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  8. Michelle Johnson Avatar
    Michelle Johnson

    Excellent write, Christine. You poems are always full of life and take me on such an adventure. Well done. Have a nice day.

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  9. Crafty green Poet Avatar
    Crafty green Poet

    You’ve created mood really well in this one,

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  10. S.L. Corsua Avatar
    S.L. Corsua

    A thrilling read. The first stanza alone sets a gripping tone of suspense. ๐Ÿ˜‰ (I kind of wished for a bag of popcorn while enjoying the intro.) Cheers.

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  11. Dick Avatar
    Dick

    What a wonderful poem, quirky and original and telling its tale so beguilingly.

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  12. Michelle Avatar
    Michelle

    I had to come back to Al and Myrtle’s story.

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  13. Nathan Avatar
    Nathan

    You not only get inside the mind of adolescence but in a larger sense that part in all of us that seeks to “possess secret knowledge.” An amazing poem.

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  14. paisley Avatar
    paisley

    i wonder sometimes why you don’t write more fiction,, you are such an excellent story teller…….

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  15. Jo Avatar
    Jo

    The two strands are braided beautifully. I really enjoyed this and it sounds wonderful….record it!

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